Advice blog

Walt: Understand and use new vocabulary. 

Task description: I have been learning about comic books and helped 
people to understand what they should do to get some help so they
don't get stuck, 

Jorelle settings

Walt: write a setting description.

Task description: We have been writing about our own sentence of our settings.

Mr Goodwin's car

Walt: we had to imagine about Mr Goodwin's

His car is silver like shiny metal and is 5 seats. It is a ford which has 4 bright wheels also can control the car and has black dull seats it has 2 medium cup holders in the front. Which was really expensive also has a tv in the front.

The story of the car

Long ago There was the most expensive car in the universe it was a shiny metal car. Hmm I wonder who’s inside the car I open my eyes and walk to him “What it’s my teacher from school Mr Goodwin”. I’ve never seen anything like this before I walked up to my teacher then he invited me to go in his new car then i see a tv a coffee machine and a big boot i felt like living in there.

I was so so Jealous of him that I was going to faint inside his car this better be a dream Mr G right. “ No it is real you are looking at the new car ever and the coolest car ever” Mr G said “ I thought you were cheap Mr G” I said, I look at his car and I already know it is going to be cooler inside. I faint in the comfortable chair and i dream

that i had thousands of the same car wake up wake up said Jorelle” Mr Goodwin oooh it was just a dream.   

Task description: We have been imaging about Mr Goodwin's car and we have been thinking about what to write about Mr Goodwin's car

Superhero story

Walt: write a narrative story.

At the far away Auckland city, Iron man was on top of a tall building looking for villains that could destroy the city. This day there was one evil villain, in his purple sleeves. The nasty Joker! The Joker through a bomb at every building in the city. Luckily Iron man spots the crime. The Joker laughs “Hahaha this plan will be perfect”...

While he throws his 3 cards it accelerated in the air it makes more evil villains come to life they are called the evil shadow the ghostly wizard last but not least captain mastermind. They were the hardest to bet then iron man see’s foggy clouds in his way KAPOW!!! BANG!!! BOOF!!! Iron man banged on the building so he went quick as a flash Zoooooom.

Iron man flies off. Joker disguises with his 5 cards into a president. So Joker president goes into the building. “I will steal that case in no time” Joker said but iron man couldn't find him but figured out that he had cards in his hand so he searched for cards and he caught Joker he was like the president but then had 50 cards in his pocket so he went with a flash.

Suddenly Iron man jumps onto Joker KAPOW!! Iron man smashes on the building wall and Joker ran away to get the case from the real president so Iron man got up and flew all the way up the building and opens president's door and he see’s Joker running and he grabs his legs and throws him around and he flew down and took them to jail.

“Take this Joker to jail i had” said Iron man so he went to defeat the others and they destroyed Half of the city but they were gone but he found something on the floor it was the three villains. They were really tiny and so he threw them in the water. “Who made the 3 villains so tiny, That is so interesting” said Iron man Hulk laughs because he smashed the 3 villains really tiny.      

Task description: We have been writing about our own superhero writing.  

Jorelle agree disagree

Revenge of the Aliens 2.4.1996

Agree/ Disagree

Use the text to figure out whether the Author would agree or disagree with the statements below.

You will need to:

1. state whether the author would agree or disagree
2. put the page number that you found your evidence for this
3. explain how the evidence you found makes you think the author would agree or disagree with the statement.

The first one has been done for you

Statement	Agree/ Disagree	Page	Explanation
Brendon thinks they had zapped a lot of Aliens.	Agree	21	Brendon says “ It’s practically a world record” which means it must be a lot.
Each of the spaceships they destroy has over 50 Aliens on board.	Agree	21	Because it says that the alien spaceship bites the dust! Another one hundred aliens blown to bits!
Kelly and Brendon are siblings.	Disagree	25	“ Haven’t you gone home yet Kelly” Mum said, and that is why Kelly and Brendon aren't siblings
Before today Brendon had only got to level 6 before.	Agree	21	Brendon says “ We’re nearly up to level seven, I’ve never got that far before”.
Level 7 is easy for Brendon and Kelly.	Disagree	22	Brendon says “It’s  the most difficult level of all. I don’t think anyone’s ever got to level 7 before “ .
Mum was frightened that Brendon and Kelly had been sucked into  the computer.	Agree	25	Because Mum said “ Kelly and Brendon were in front of the computer just a minute ago”

Jorelle Discussion doc

Discussion Doc

Suzie and the Space Nuts

Walt: understand multiple viewpoints and perspectives

Task

Work on this Doc together with a partner or in a 3.

You will need to share the doc with each other and be respectful to one another. You can only write an answer when you both agree.

What was Suzie talking about when she said “Billy broke it…” Why do you think that?

In Suzie’s sleep she thought that Billy broke something outside the window but it wasn’t him. Because she was sleeping she didn’t know that it was a flying saucer which landed in the empty section next door. Because she was asleep

What do you think happened last time Freeble and Gort landed on a planet? Why do you think that?

They landed on a planet where there were bad Aliens and creepy monsters. I think that because Gort is saying  “ I’m warning you  remember Freeble, this is a bad idea! Remember what happened on the last planet we landed on”.

Why do the aliens think that Suzie is ugly? Why do you think that?-

I think that Gort does not like any kind of horrible monsters like Suzie. I also think that Suzie thinks that the Aliens were ugly and the Aliens think Suzie was even more ugly.

Why do you think that Freebie ate the plates instead of the food? Why do you think that?

Because Freeble thought that all alien food is yum and Humans is yuck. That is why Freeble ate the plates and not Human food. But to humans they think that alien food is yuck and human food is nice.

Why would suzie want to have a ride in the spaceship? Why do you think that?

When Suzie got in the spaceship she knew that the Aliens were going to eat her because the Aliens asked Suzie what do girls like to eat on this planet. She also knew that the Aliens were going to eat her because the Alien said sounds great lead the way, them I’m STARVING….

What do you think has happened to the spaceship?

The cat took the spaceship because he was the only one who saw the spaceship. This was when Gort and Freeble were fighting ,because Gort felt like the planet wasn’t safe because of what happened last time that they landed on a planet.

Jorelle Family facts

           Walt: identify and solve fraction problems.

         
          


         Task description: Today for maths we did problem solving and we had to 
          answer question's and do our own problem solving. 

Jorelle last post

Dear fans I hope you had a fantastic time reading everything on my blog post this term. Even though I hope you have a fun happy time in the holidays and next time

I might write more on my blog post and I might write more better. I hope you

Have a nice time spending with your family’s this term.    

Jorelle fiafia

Did you enjoy pt England's fiafia performance. Last week on Thursday

We had a big performance. I felt very excited and nervous at the same time.

Fiafia performance was last week on Thursday there was thousands and thousands of people. I felt very excited and nervous at the sametime.

On fiafia there were heaps of people and supporters cheering. It was last week on Thursday. Where we were was outside on the grass where we all sit and watch. For fiafia we had to stay in our groups.

On fiafia we had to sit down watch other kids perform on stage. Fiafia

was last week on Thursday we were also outside on the field where we all perform. We had to stay in our fiafia groups with our teachers.

My group was Togan I chose togan because I wanted to see what it feel’s like to be in the tongan group. It took 5 to 6 weeks to practice.

The group that i liked was nesian fusion group was doing the fire dance and sometimes we had problems because kids kept standing up and we couldn't see.

Fiafia was a really great experience for me and the favorite thing that i liked was when we watched everybody dance on stage and people was supporting.  

Family facts

camp experience

Walt: organise my ideas into paragraphs and link them together.

On  a sunny Tuesday I went to camp with the year ⅚ when i first went to camp I felt very nervous. And the group that I was in was the kind kings also we have been sleeping in tents and had a really crazy time.

What i did at camp was playing a lot of fun activities for three days. In three days i was sleeping in a tent outside with three girls named Hilary and penny it was very funny when i was sleeping with them .

My favourite activity was kayaking because you get to paddle on a kayak and the

Funniest part was when one of them fell out of the kayak. And also some other kids hopped out of there kayak and helped people whether there going left or right.

My 2nd favourite highlight was top town. But the secret name was called the killer zone. The reason why I picked top town was because it had heaps of fun

Games.

At camp I really enjoyed playing varied activities. I also liked camping because

It was a lot of fun especially making new friends in a group. Camp was a awesome

Experience.

Task Description: Two weeks ago there was a year 5&6 camp going on. 

We also played heaps of activities at camp and had heaps of fun. Every single person enjoyed this years camp experience.

Jorelle little red riding hood twist

Walt: retell a story

In a far away land we're all wolves play little red wolf went walking to her grandma wolf’s house to give bones to grandma. She went to a dark mysterious forest she was walking until big bad girl came chasing after little red, suddenly big bad girl came to little reds grannys house.

When grandma wolf was in her bed she heard a knock at the door and she said who’s there big bad girl said me little red riding hood so big bad girl opened the door and chased after grandma wolf but big bad girl locked her up in the cupboard. But when little red knocked on the door big bad girl heard a knock and quickly put granny's clothes on and rushed in bed.

when little red opened the door she went to her grandma and said my what small nose you have, and what small eyes you have, but when big bad girl ran out of bed she was chasing after little red then grandma wolf pulled her in the cupboard with her stick so while big bad girl tried to open the cupboard big bad girl broke the door and grandma wolf and little red was  

screaming and running around when the woodcutter heard somebody screaming. The wood cutter opened the door and saw big bad girl in the house so big bad girl ran away and little red and grandma wolf said thank you for saving me and the woodcutter finally went back to his work.

                                              THE END

Task description: I wrote little red riding hood with a twist

Jorelle the three little pigs

Long ago in a forest three little pigs went off and built there houses out of hay, sticks, & bricks. the next day they finally built their three houses out of hay sticks & bricks 2 pigs went outside singing and singing and playing around until the big bad wolf came and saw the 2 pigs. Unfortunately the big bad wolf came rushing after the 2 pigs so the first pig went running in his house. Suddenly the wolf did

 wolf said little pig little pig let me in the pig not by my hair of my chinny chin chin. So the big bad wolf puffed and he puffed and he blew the house down so the little pig ran as fast as he could to the second house. Suddenly the big bad wolf did tricks on the 2 little pigs and the little pigs sang a song Until the big bad wolf said little pigs little pig let me in and the pigs said not by the hair of my chinny chin chin

So he puffed and he puffed and blew the house down and the 2 pigs ran and ran and went to the third brick house. So the two pigs knocked on the door very quickly and ran under the pig bed and felt very scared so the pig locked the door and he played his piano and the two pigs came out of the bed and they sang and sang until the big bad wolf put costumes on to pretend that he was a dentist so the big bad wolf said in a different voice little pig little pig let me in i am a dentist

but then he opened the door a little bit and the big bad wolf tried to get in and the pig grabbed a big toothbrush and banged his foot and the wolf screamed and he screamed and pulled the mat and slammed the door. But then he thought of a plan so the big bad wolf went up the chimney and the pig realised he was going down the chimney so he opened the pot so when the bad wolf went down he felt something weird then the big bad wolf screamed because it burnt his bottom and he screamed and screamed.

THE END

Task Description: we were watching a movie the three little pigs and we retell our own story.

Walt: we retell a story